Texas Tribune: How to write stereotyped religious journalism

The Texas Tribune recently offered a pointed comparison-contrast to Tim Dunn's political-religious quasi theocratic compound just down the road, by profiling Connection Christian Church in Odessa, Texas. Here's co-pastor Dawn Weaks: 

"Christian Nationalism is an example of this kind of arrogance parading as Christianity,” she said. “There is nothing Jesus-like about that."

That's the bottom line.

All very good so far.

The church, a member of the Disciples of Christ, has a history far beyond the Dunns' independent church. And, that itself is important. That said, the Trib perpetuates some stereotypes. I lived in Hobbs for a little less than two years, and nobody asked me my religion at H-E-B. That said, I didn't introduce myself to others. (I still think it's a stereotype or cliché; I'm sure that even when two strangers introduce themselves, it comes up far less than 100 percent and probably less than 75 percent. Maybe less than 50 percent, which definitely makes it stereotype, not generalization.)

The story is nowhere near perfect. It's got clichés or beyond, not limited to the above.

There's also a BIG contextual failure on this:

This year, Pew Research reported that 80% of Americans believe religion is losing influence in American life. And nearly half of those who say religion is losing influence said it is bad for society.

That means, as I told the Trib and Nic Garcia on Twitter, that MORE than half find such change either a neutral or to the good, counting "no opinion" and "don't know" as "neutral." (The Trib also didn't link to the Pew piece, a big, BIG no-no in today's world.)

In fairness, it later cites this from the same survey:

In the same survey, less than a third, 27%, of white Evangelical Protestants wanted Christianity declared the official national religion.

While that's not the same as "losing influence," it does offer some framing. But, it's a further one-third the story down. In addition? NO URL for the Pew story. THAT's not acceptable.

And, reporter Nic Garcia's not a newbie. These things aren't excusable.

Beyond that, since Texas Christian University IS AFFILIATED with the Disciples of Christ, beyond and before running a disclaimer at the end, why is there no profile of the denomination? Since this is about two pastors from the denomination, where is a mention of, let alone a discussion of, Brite Divinity School?